Ernest Hemingway wrote “Hills Like White Elephants” in 1927. Fifty-four years later, Russell Banks wrote “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat.” Despite being set in different countries and time periods, the two share many similarities. It is difficult to read the two stories without thinking that perhaps Banks had Hemingway’s story in mind when he wrote “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat.”

Ernest Hemingway, author of “Hills Like White Elephants,” poses with a cat
At their simplest levels, both stories follow a couple’s conversation about plans to terminate a pregnancy. However, the words “abortion” and even “pregnancy” are never actually mentioned in either story. Both couples talk vaguely about how things will be after the abortion. In both stories, the women mention their belief that once the fetus is gone everything will be better. In Hemingway’s story, Jig says “if I do it you’ll be happy and things will be like they were and you’ll love me?” and later “I’ll do it and everything will be fine (Hemingway 418).” Similarly, in Banks’ story the couple discusses her way of thinking. The man starts out
‘I hate this whole thing. Hate! Just know that much will you?’
She reached out and placed a hand on his arm. ‘I know you do. So do I. But it’ll be all right again afterwards. I promise. It’ll be just like it was.’
‘You can’t promise that. No one can. It won’t be all right afterwards. It’ll be lousy.’ (Banks 65)
As seen above, in Banks’ story the man is not convinced that abortion will solve their problems. In fact, later on he tells the woman that he would like to just leave her on the island because he doesn’t want her to go through with the abortion. In Hemingway’s story Jig talks about how she doesn’t know what she wants to do. She isn’t quite sure if she wants a baby, but she also isn’t sure that she wants to abort it. She agrees to go through with the procedure to please the man because he convinces her that the fetus is “the only thing that bothers us. It’s the only thing that makes us unhappy.”
Both stories are made up almost completely of dialogue. Since both stories are mostly dialogue, there is never a need for names. In both the characters are simply referred to as “the man” and “the girl.” In Hemingway’s story the man calls the girl “Jig” twice. However, this is only a nickname (jig in this sense meaning trick or game) and is used by the man to belittle the woman just as much as calling her “the girl.” Banks also belittles the woman in his story stating that “the young woman was a girl, actually, twenty or maybe twenty-one” (63).

Russell Banks, author of “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat,” with a cat
In both stories the women are struggling with depression. The woman in Banks’ story states it directly saying that her mother “thinks I’m fragile. Especially now since I’ve had some close calls. At least that’s how she sees them.” “Sees what?” the man asks. “Oh you know. Depression” (65). In Hemingway’s story, Jig is less direct. She simply tells the man that she will go through with the abortion because “I don’t care about me. And I’ll do it and then everything will be fine” (418). She needs the man to care for her because she doesn’t care about herself and will do anything to insure that he continues to love her.
Finally both stories take place in places of transit. In “Hills Like White Elephants” the couple is waiting at a train station whereas in “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat” the couple is in a rowboat on their way between the shore and an island in the center of a lake. The couple in “Hills Like White Elephants” is able to choose to take the train that will take them to Madrid for Jig’s procedure or they can choose to go home. Similarly, in “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat,” the couple could choose to stay on the lake longer than they planned to so that the woman cannot make it to her appointment or they could adhere to their schedule. Both couples are still able to change their minds about what to do about the women’s pregnancies.
However, this is the only similarity between the settings of the two stories. Hemingway’s story takes place in the 1920s at a bar at a train station in Barcelona. Banks’ story takes place in the 1980s on a lake at a trailer park in America. These settings also help to show a difference of wealth between the two couples. Hemingway’s characters are well off enough to drink as much as they like at a foreign bar and are able to travel across Spain to have an abortion. Banks’ characters however, live in a trailer park. The woman lives with her mother. They are certainly not as wealthy as those in Hemingway’s story.
Despite the differences in the settings of “Hills Like White Elephants” and “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat,” the stories are clearly very similar. There are too many similarities for them to have happened by chance. Russell Banks must have had Ernest Hemingway’s “Hills Like White Elephants” in mind when he wrote “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat.”
Works Cited
Banks, Russell. “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat.” The Story and Its Writer. Ed. Ann Charters. Compact 9th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2014. 62-67. Print.
Hemingway, Ernest. “Hills Like White Elephants.” The Story and Its Writer. Ed. Ann Charters. Compact 9th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2014. 416-19. Print.